Havenfern High for the Divinely Gifted [PG-13]

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Im sure some of you have been wondering where I have been, why I am not continuing my TT fanfic (Thats right, all two of you!) Well, the thing is I've been working on my first, proper, GOOD original story, one that I am 100% determined to work on until the end!

As much as I enjoy writing fanfics, I find writing original stories to be more challenging and fun! So without further ado, I present to you...

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“The last of its kind. Welcome to Havenfern High for the Divinely Gifted, a place where Angels and Demons co-exist in peace until graduation day, before real life forces them to tear each others throats out.”

“It’s a school.”

“I know that.”

“Why a school?”

“It’s not just any school.”

“Why this school, then?”

“Have you noticed the students? Have you been paying any attention whatsoever?”

“…”

“First and foremost, there’s that Celestial.”




Damien sighed. He twirled a finger absent-mindedly on his armrest whilst his other hand supported his very lazy head. School was such a drag, he thought to himself. Eyelids drooping, his wandering mind began conjuring images of freedom. The old forest behind his house where he often willingly lost himself for hours on end and scantily clad women danced in his mind… namely her…

Julia…

“Damien!” A voice, an unpleasant one, shattered his playful dreams and wrenched him back to reality in one blow. Damien’s teacher, Mr. Higgle, whom the majority of the student population called ‘Giggles’ for synonymous reasons, proved the theory that we had evolved from aquatic creatures simply by his existence. Bar the fact that he looked as if evolution had skipped a step or two in his case. It was as if a fish decided to just sprout legs, walk out of the ocean and take up a job at Havenfern High for the divinely gifted.
Perhaps fittingly, his voice sounded like a fresh salmon slapped on a wooden bench, and it was with this voice that he interrupted, rather rudely, Damien’ fantasies of everything yet nothing in particular.

“Yes Mr. Giggles-er, I mean, Higgle?”

The classroom murmured with chuckles and Giggles reddened around the ears. He had heard the name before, it was broken to him during a Staff meeting where he had boasted that the students adored and admired him, by Mrs. Dafrey, who had gotten tired of Giggles and his salmon-slapping voice. It definitely shut him up.

“Do you think you’re funny, Mister Paparidis?”

“No, Mister Higgle, I don’t”

“Does the class think you’re funny, Mister Paparidis?”

“I don’t know sir, ask them.”

The class began to chuckle again, this time louder than before.

“Oh, so now you’re a smart aleck, are you? Well let’s see how smart you really are. Answer this question on the board.”

The question read: There is a fork in the road. One leads to certain death for you, the other leads to certain death for your entire village. Which do you choose?

Damien thought, and thought some more. He realised he hated Philosophy. That didn’t help him much. He also realised he hated Giggles and that Giggles really wasn’t a very happy person like his name suggested. Again, no help.

“Er… The path that leads to certain death for me?”

“Wrong, Mr Papridis. If you were paying attention, you’d have learnt that nothing about a divine being is certain, that is why you are all divine in the first place. The correct answer would’ve been either path for the reason just stated. I’d like to see you after class, Mr. Paparidis.”

Damien sighed again. Today wasn’t working out. Then again, no days seemed to work out for him. He’d only been at this school for a week and he’d yet to make any friends, or even acquaintances. Granted, he made his class laugh, but that was hardly anything to be proud of. His class was so dull they’d laugh at a crooked nail as if it was somehow a novel concept.

Time seemed to stretch on as if it was swimming against the tide in a river of wet cement. Damien could’ve sworn he saw the clock hanging on the wall tick backwards at least four times. He scanned the room for any potential Chronis’ that actually have the capability to manipulate time, but he saw none. Eventually class was dismissed, and as the rest of the students packed up their bags and left in a hurry, Damien was forced to hang back and wait to see just what Giggles had in store for him.

“Mr. Paparidis. Explain yourself. You haven’t been here for long and already you’re talking back to your superiors. You’re heading down the wrong path.”

Damien was tempted to remind Giggles of the fact that it was a path of uncertainty, and what did it matter if it was all uncertain, but decided against it. Instead he bowed his head in mock shame.

“I’m sorry, Mr. Higgle. I didn’t think.”

Giggles seemed to be buying it, nodding in agreement. “That’s right, Mr. Paparidis, you didn’t think. But it’s good that you apologized, and that’s why I’m going to let you off with a warning. Don’t do it again.”

Damien simply nodded in response. “Yes sir, I won’t”

“Good, now go on and enjoy your lunch.”

Damien picked up his bag and left, grateful that he had been in such a situation many times before, and therefore had managed to train himself to feign apology. The truth was, Damien wasn’t sorry, and he most certainly was going to do it again.
 
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Nice to see you back amongst the Toon Zone fold, Dimster. I have to agree with you on the fanfics thing: they're great fun, but just no replacement for an original work. And on that note, I'm very excited to see you return with one.:D

The first and most obvious thing is that, whilst the "novelty school" doesn't feel so original in the post-Potter literary world, there's just something so appealing about your premise. As you probably already know, I'm a sucker for religious commentary, which is probably most of the attraction for me. Though I'm still unsure what you mean by "divine being" - deity, angel, demon or something else?:confused: - the idea of having this be "just another gig" is really quite class.:D

In terms of plot and character, there isn't really much I can say, what with this being only the first chapter an' all. Still, from what little we've seen, Damien looks set to be an entertaining protagonist: a troublemaker with a quick wit and an even quicker brain. I get the feeling he'll be fun to watch.:D And if the irony with his name is deliberate, then I have to give you full credit for that too.;)

So, this looks set to be another cool story from you. I'll be sure to see the rest.:D

-Matt A-
 
You know, it's stories like this that make me really happy I decided to start attempting to read more than I actually write here (if that makes sense), I still don't read as many stories as I'd like - But when I see concepts like this, it just blows me away. :eek:

While this is only the first chapter, and things could change radically - It's not even the basic idea that 'this is a school for celestial beings' that kept me interested (interesting though the idea is!), but the characters themselves. I couldn't help but crack a smile at Mr. Higgled's description, quite fun to have celestial beings describing somebody via Dawin's theory too, even if he is a typical 'not quite beastly, but stern enough' school teacher. Still, he's the perfect foil for Damien, and it was fun to watch them bounce off one another.

Looking forward to seeing more, hopefully longer, chapters in the future!

And I'm kinda the opposite with regards to fan fiction, I panic far too much about getting other peoples characters 'right', and it becomes a chore for me. So full credit to anyone who finds it easy and can do it well. :)
 
Quite an enticing start, to say the least.:)

Like Matt said, this is rather reflective of the Potter-esque type of school, but with a twist. I too thought that by "celestials" you meant angels; instead, I suppose it's your own little word for "metahumans."

Yet another interesting feature about this installment, evidenced by Damien hinting at it, is the fact that normal people (aka mortals, in here) look up to the Celestials, not as role models, but as superior beings. Considering that most civilians see super-powered people as either a threat or as a saving grace (not as their betters), your take on the relationship in fantasy world hasn't been done too much, and it's nice to see that for once on this forum.

I wonder how you'll confront the issue of Celestial-superiority, if at all. Damien already seems to think that he's a god among insects, and that might be true, but we'll just have to wait and see.
 
To Matt - It's good to be back after so long! I've been so caught up with life (And my significant other... ;) ) That I have completely forgotten about writing ANYthing! BUt with some (Ok, maybe A LOT) of support from her I have begun my first original story... Also, it is unfair that now a story set in high school seems so unoriginal when compared to Harry Potter, when it is obvious to anyone with even a moderate literary library that the setting of School is a very old one indeed...

To ArtificialIdiot - I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far! It's always good to hear comments like these, but if there is ANYthing that needs to be improved, to not hesitate to jump on it and let me know! (This goes for everyone BTW) And about fanfics, I don't bother to follow the characteristics of the original characters too much, because I find it much more interesting to implement quirks and features of mine that normally wouldn't be suitable for the series and the rating it has...:anime:

To Oh look I'm... - Once again, Glad you like it, but be warned that this is definitely not going to be a typical superhero story, complete with spandex and tacky masks :D, this is going to be more of a fantasy story, with (mostly) original creatures and some borrowed from popular folklore... You'll see what I mean soon enough!

Anyway, on to the next exciting chapter!

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THAT old tree...

“What’s so special about the Celestial?”

“His power… his ability. It’s very…unique.”

“Okay so, fair enough about the Celestial, but is it really worth to stake our whole operation on this one school?”

“Even if it was just him, yes. But the fun doesn’t end there, oh no. There’s also that girl, the Halfer.”



So happy he was with his success, he failed to notice that another individual had crossed his path, and they collided. Damien fell backwards and his assailant fell with him. Shaking the birds tweeting around his head out, he inhaled a deep breath in readiness to blast the careless person with a violent tirade of insults.

That’s when he saw who exactly had bumped into him.

She was an Arratun, her small horns and the dirty-blonde patch of hair atop her head giving her away. An Arratun is born from a Demonic and an Angelic parent. The horns betray her demon side, whereas her blonde patch mirrors her Heavenly heritage. She was also short, though not too short, and her hair, barring the small blonde patch, was dyed a raven black. Damien exhaled quickly, knowing that it wasn’t in his best interests to upset an Arratun, and lent her a hand. She refused his help and pulled herself to her feet with little fuss. Damien simply grinned nervously with his hand still extended.

“Um… sorry ‘bout that, I wasn’t paying much attention.”

The half-demoness simply raised an eyebrow.

“Uh… so yeah… my name’s Damien, by the way.” The increasingly unnerved Celestial continued, hoping that she’d at least play along.

Damien’s hand was still extended, waiting for an answer from this pale-skinned halfer.

“Anzu. And watch where you’re going.”

And with that, the conversation was as good as finished. Damien blinked and she was gone.

He sighed in relief. An Arratunian’s temper is something he could live without.

The incident now history, Damien continued towards the old oak tree on the border of the school grounds where he normally spent his recess and lunch. With what seemed to be his fifth sigh in a span of only ten minutes, he lowered himself beside the gargantuan trunk and lost himself in thoughts once again.

Bad day, young one?

Damien smiled. You could say that, Baezk’le. You could also say it’s been one of the best. That’s why I’m a Celestial. The uncertainty compels me.

The great oak reverberated with jest.

When Damien first entered the gates of this school, his gaze was immediately drawn towards this Oak tree that stood by itself in the middle of a completely empty grassy plain. Before long, it became his safe sanctuary, a place where no-one else bothered to go except him. During a rather sleepy recess, Damien had dozed off on an exposed root, and was more than surprised to hear a voice coming from the tree urging him to wake up and go to class. Thinking that is was just his imagination, as he did have an overactive one, he thought no more of it and wandered back to the school buildings. The following lunch found him once again at the base of the tree, only to hear a deep, wizened voice informing him, whilst branches snaked their way around his body, that he was currently prisoner to the tree-lords of Zret-Lhafek where he would spend the remainder of his life as a cocoon for their saplings. Once Damien had stopped his hysterical screaming and struggling enough to hear the old tree shaking in laughter, the two quickly became friends.

Haha… you should be proud of being a Celestial, young Damien, and I can feel that you are going to be a very strong one, very powerful indeed.

Damien landed a playful punch on the trunk of the tree, to which he received a slap in the face from a whip-like branch.

Ow… Damn it Baek-

Another slap.

Watch your tongue, Damien.

Sorry, sorry. You hit too hard.

The tree ruffled its leaves.

You are much too weak, child. Focus more on your training, not your daydreams of girls in bikinis.

Damien grinned.

I can’t help it Baek, have you seen the assets on some of those Angels? Redefines the term ‘Heavenly’ eh?

He received no response.

Ok, ok stupid question. Of course you have, and you don’t care, right?

Still no response.

Baek?

Hush, young one.

Damien turned his head to look for any sign of what had caused the great Oak to cease talking. He spotted it in the form of Anzu, the Arratun he had unceremoniously bowled over at the beginning of lunch.

It’s her! What’s she doing here?

You know her, Damien?

Yes, she’s a girl I accidentally ran over on my way here.

You RAN HER OVER? She’s an Arratun, what were you thinking?

I wasn’t thinking…

Damien had a faint sense of Deja-Vu.

The two were so caught up their bickering that they failed to notice Anzu until she had gotten comfortable on the other side of the tree.

“It’s you again.”

Damien froze like a rabbit on a freeway. She had already spotted him, even though he was on the other side of the towering tree.

“Oh! Hey, Anzu… Um, how’re you?”

“Sore.”

Damien winced. “Uhh…yeah, sorry about that, again.”

“Forget it; you’re only apologizing because you’re afraid of me.”

She’s got you there, Damien.

Shut it, Baek- SLAP.

Anzu turned around at the sound of branch hitting flesh.

“Running into me wasn’t enough? You had to run into the tree too?”

“NO! I mean, no, the tree hit me.”

Anzu shook her head sadly. “You fool, a tree can’t hit you.”

“Heh, Baek can, and he hits hard too.”

What followed was an awkward silence as Anzu simply stared at Damien as if he were insane. She slowly turned her gaze towards the tree, half-expecting to see a face embedded in all that bark, but all she saw was the Oak’s rough skin.

“Baek?” Was all she managed to utter.

“Uh, yeah.” Damien replied, becoming increasingly unnerved.

“Who’s Baek?”

“The tree. Baek, or Baezk’le. The tree is Baek.”

Anzu looked at the tree again, as if there was something she might’ve missed. There was nothing, all she saw was a plain old Oak tree, standing forlornly in the middle a grassy plain that made up most of the school grounds and beyond.

Baek, say something! Tell her I’m not crazy!

I’m sorry young one, I should’ve told you this a long time ago.

Told me what? What is it-

“What are you doing?”

Damien’s mood changed, from slight indifference to almost panicking in a mere iota of a second. Why couldn’t Anzu hear what Baek was saying? What did Baek mean when he said he should’ve told me something? These were all valid questions, but ones that simply couldn’t be answered by him.

Damien regained slight composure and replied “Nothing. I was…nothing. Forget about everything I said. So, what are you doing here, anyway?”

“I’ve always come here. This is my spot.” Anzu replied rather indignantly, as if to say the shade of the Great Oak tree wasn’t big enough for the both of them.

“Then how come I’ve never seen you here before?”

“Because you weren’t here last year.”

“Fair enough. Do you mind the company?”

Anzu was taken aback by this sudden politeness, and didn’t quite know how to react. On the one hand she couldn’t think of anything she’d want more than privacy and solitude. On the other, misery loves company.

“As long as you keep your distance.”

“Understood.” Damien replied, feigning a military salute before scooting across and behind the Oak tree. Anzu’s normally apathetic composure cracked momentarily, and she allowed a small grin to light up her delicate face before it vanished into the proverbial wisp of smoke, as if it was never there to begin with.

You sure know how to cheer people up, Damien.

I didn’t do anything, Baek.

You didn’t need to, young one, all you had to do was be yourself, and you did that.

She seems so… hurt. And defensive.

The old tree sighed, a deep, rumbling sound that shook his leaves and Damien’ teeth.

And yet, it only took you five minutes to break down that defense that probably took her her whole life to build.

But why? Why is she like this?

Baek sighed again, this time in a slightly tamer tone.

Because she is an Arratun, Damien. Arratun’s are extremely rare, you know that, and because of their lineage, they are viewed upon with contempt and suspicion. She’s an outcast in both worlds, the Demonic and the Angelic.

For the first time in his life, Damien felt a strange sensation, an urge to help her and make her feel welcomed. He had no idea that in a few moments, he’d be doing exactly that.

What she said before, what you said before, about me being able to talk to you but she can’t, what was with that?

There was a silence as Baek contemplated the best way to tell this story.

Young Damien, as you know, being a Celestial means going down a path of endless possibilities. During your early years your potential power is unknown, and-

Yes yes, I know all this. Damien said with sudden impudence. He received another slap to the face for it.

Quiet boy, I’m the one telling this story here, now sit and listen, otherwise I’ll prove to you that I wasn’t joking the first time we met.

Damien quickly remembered the threat to hollow him out and turn him into a breeding place for carnivorous plants and shut his mouth with speeds in excess of mach 5.

That’s better. Now, where was I? Ah yes, uncertainty. Once a Celestial reaches puberty, he undergoes a transformation as his powers manifest. Telekinesis, flight, pyro-kinesis, geokinesis, it’s all possible, yet unknown. Some Celestials acquire magnificent powers of matter manipulation, others, well, others acquire the fantastic ability to change the colour of their skin.

Damien nodded. He had been through that phase, just like every other Celestial he knew, which, granted, wasn’t many. He had yet to figure out what powers he had acquired, but that was common amongst many Celestials. Some even passed into their twenties before finally discovering what they had gained.

But that still doesn’t answer my question.

I’m getting to that, us elderly like to drag on a bit with our stories, now shut up and listen. Some powers that Celestials can manifest are rarer than others. Flight is the most common, followed by being able to command wind, because a Celestial’s natural affinity is with the sky. Things such as light manipulation and geokinesis are also common, but not as much. But there is one power, one ability that hasn’t been seen in thousands of years, Damien.

And what would that be, Baek?

The ability to communicate with nature.

Damien stiffened. Communicate with nature? He could… he could communicate with nature? Baek wasn’t an exception?

You mean… you’re telling me that I can talk with any plant?

And animal, Damien.

Animals as well?

But…but… why me?

That’s a stupid question to ask, you’ve been granted a wonderful gift, don’t ask why, ask what more you can do with it.

I…wow. I don’t know... I don’t know what to do now… Damien replied meekly. He was unique, special, a never-seen-before Celestial in thousands of years.

I guess… Damien began. I guess me and Anzu can be freaks together, then.

Ha, ha, ha. Indeed, Damien, although she’s a much more attractive freak then you could ever hope to be, I’m afraid to say.

Oh come on Baek, how can you say that to about my roguish good looks and sharp wit?

Roguish? Is that what they-

Before Baek could finish his scathing comeback, he was interrupted by a group of demons that had somehow found their way to Baek’s resting spot.



“I take it by your silence that you are suitably impressed?”

“It…I…No, no it can’t be…”

“Oh but it is! That’s the wonderful thing about it! Can you imagine the power such a being would have? And so young and naïve, so impressionable…”

“You can’t be serious!”

“I am. Do you have a problem with this?”

“I…no, no problem.”

“Very good.”

“Uh… About the Halfer, all I’m seeing is a scared little girl.”

“She may not seem like much now, but you will see the potential this young one harbours.”

“Do… do you think she could actually become a Sera?”

“There is a distinct possibility.”

“But remember the last two Halfers we thought could become Seras-.”

“Were false alarms, yes I know. This one is different.”

“Fair enough. Is that all?”

Of course not! There’s also Azazael, the Demon.”




“Haha, I shoulda figured you’d be here.” This brash comment was accompanied by grunts and chuckles, the kind you’d hear from a Neanderthal once he discovered fire for the first time.

Damien poked his head around the tree trunk in order to get a better look at the cavemen, as he liked to call them. He noticed that they were talking to and berating Anzu, and that they had not yet seen him. He turned back and grinned.

You’re very popular today, Baek. Is there something you’re not telling me?

Very funny, Damien. Are you going to help the girl or not?

What am I supposed to do? I talk with plants and animals, like you said. I don’t have super strength, or flight, or telekinesis. And even if I did, they’re demons! You know, with the fire and brimstone and the demonic overlord parents, that’s why we don’t mess with them.

Coward.

That one word did more then a slap in the face could ever do. No-one had called him that before.

Don’t call me that, Baek.

Then do something about this.

What can I do?

Confront them.

I can’t!

Why not?

Because I’ll get pounded into the dirt!

So you’re afraid?

Well, yes!

Then you’re a coward.

At this point Damien was fuming. Today was too much to handle. Bowling over an Arratun, finding out he has a gift that hasn’t been seen in thousands of years, and now this.

Ok fine, you damn sapling, I’ll do it. If I come back in a wheelchair with no use of my legs, it’s your damn fault.

Satisfied he had gotten enough insults in the one sentence; Damien picked himself up and circled the tree trunk, where he came across one of the demons, possibly the ringleader, dangling one of Anzu’s books just slightly out of her reach in his pudgy, red-tinted hands. Distracted by Damien’ sudden appearance, Anzu managed to snatch her book back from his grey fingernails. Angered by his loss, he approached Damien and thrust his scaly face to within inches of the Celestial’s.

“Who in the Divine are you?”

“I’m the guy who’s not into other guys, so if you want a kiss, eat a breath mint and turn to one of your boyfriends behind you.”

Without warning, the demon spat in Damien’ face, the disgusting black tar-like liquid slowly making its way down his face.

“So, you think you’re funny, do you? Did you find that funny?”

Trying desperately to keep his cool, Damien simply grinned before replying. “I think I’m hilarious, and I found that to be rather typical of your kind.”

If it was possible, the Demon boy got even angrier, and although he was shorter than Damien now, if he managed to transform into his true demon state, there was no telling what he could do. He was close to doing it; Damien could literally feel the heat emanating from the demon’s skin. It didn’t take long to anger a demon child.

“You better watch yourself, Celestial.”

Damien continued grinning “Or what, stumpy?”

“Or else I’ll turn you into ash!”

“Oh really? How do you propose you do that?”

The demon narrowed his eyes and hissed through clenched canines. “I’ll transform into my true self, and then you’ll see.”

Damien stooped down slightly to meet his gaze. “I’d very much like to see you try.”

That was it. With a roar, the demon boy suddenly sprouted reptilian wings from his spine, and two long, curved horns emerged from his skull as is entire body grew bigger, leaner and meaner, until he stood almost two heads taller than Damien.

To this day, Damien still wondered why he had decided to anger the demon enough for him to transform. It was an extremely idiotic idea, and if Baek hadn’t been there, he would surely be dead.

Um, Baek? You got me into this, a little help here?

No response.

Baek??

The demon howled as his friends started hooting and hollering, egging him on whilst Anzu stood petrified and shielded herself behind the trunk of the great Oak tree.

Now do you regret angering me, you stupid Celest?

“I regret I didn’t bring a camera with me to take a picture of your retarded face, that’s about it.”

Oh geez, I never learn. Baek!! Help me out, PLEASE!

Another roar escaped the demon’s lips as he charged Damien, who had managed to slowly put some distance between the two of them up until now.

Fore! Baek cried, quoting the oft used phrase to warn people of an incoming projectile during the ancient sport of gnome tossing.

“Crrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaack!” The great tree literally swung back like a Krezek player before using every ounce of its ancient strength to smack the repulsive demon square in the face with a particularly large branch. The connection between bark and skin seemed to last for an age, with more than a few teeth coming loose in the attack and flying in various directions. The demon was forced off his feet and hung in the air involuntarily before landing roughly on the ground, a battered, broken and ultimately defeated hell spawn. With a cry his friends scampered off, tails between their legs and with no concern for their fallen comrade. The ugly ringleader soon came to and followed suit, now in his normal state and no less petrified of the immobile tree then his so-called buddies.

Woohoo! You legend Baek, that was awesome!

Indeed it was, Damien, you owe me.



“You mean to tell me that Demon is also one of your ‘Special Students’?”

“He’s just a child. They’re all still young. All they need is some training and a slight push in ‘our’ direction.”

“Are they worth the time? I don’t want to have to endure a repeat of the events we went through last year.”

“Listen to me you insolent brat, the only reason you’re here is because of your ass-kissing father. You do not have the privilege to question me, nor to mock my remarks. Also, don’t even begin to bring up what happened last year. Just because you got cold toes while the rest of us were thrown in prison or executed does not give you the right to speak of it. Am I understood?”

“…”

“Very well.”




Damien grinned at Baek, playfully punching the trunk and receiving another slap in return. Maybe being able to talk to plants wouldn’t be as useless as he had first thought…

Anzu’s eyes were as wide as saucers in shock. Whereas before she had been annoyed, now she was terrified.

Damien, you had better try and explain the situation to Anzu, she seems slightly…afraid.

A rather large understatement, but quite true nonetheless. Damien approached her slowly, but every step he took she matched it with another step backwards.

“Anzu, don’t worry, the tree here explained it all to me. I can talk to plants.” He said cautiously, suddenly realizing how insane that sounded.

“You can what??”

“It’s my Celestial power. It’s how I’ve been talking with Baek all along, my ability is that I can talk with flora and fauna…”

Anzu relaxed slightly, but she still kept her distance from Damien.

“But…but Celestial’s can’t talk with trees, only the Rangers of Boethgraw can do that, it’s a power unique to them alone, it says so in the text book!”

Damien gave Anzu a perplexed stare, as if to say You’re quoting from a text book now?

“It’s true! Celestials can’t speak to plants, Mrs. Dafrey said so herself.”

“Ok Anzu, I need you to relax. This isn’t that big a deal. All you need to do is ask someone who actually knows stuff.”

Anzu closed her eyes and slowed her breathing. Under her breath she counted backwards from ten, over and over again. When she opened her eyes, she was met with the close-up face of Damien, staring at her with one of those “What are you doing?” looks. She yelped and jumped back in fright, dropping her book in the process.

“Ok Mr. I-can-talk-with-trees, you have fun here, talking with your buddy Bael or whatever his name is; I’m going back to class, the bell went five minutes ago.”
That was that, Anzu picked her belongings up from the ground and walked briskly off, nose in the air in her best attempt to seem as if nothing had ever happened. Damien shook his head sadly and turned back to Baek.

Can you believe her?

Actually, yes I can, the bell really did ring five minutes ago.

Oh, damn.

Without so much as a farewell, Damien bolted across the school grounds, overtaking a severely confused Anzu in the process. If he was late for one more class this week, he’d surely be suspended, and spending more time than necessary with his family is something he sorely detested and could live without.
 
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You know, I have to give some kudos points to your Significant Other. If she got you to write this, then she's clearly no idiot.;)

'Cause this story, even though it's only two chapters so far...is genius. For example, whilst 99% of fantasy/fantasy-esque stories have some form of Mentor/Guru figure inspiring their hero (Gandalf, Obi-Wan Kenobi, Charles Xavier, etc), I've yet to see a story where the Mentor is a tree. Frankly, Baek (by the way, is his name supposed to sound like "bark"?;)) is one of the most inspired ideas I've ever seen. Not just because Damien is being taught his Life Lessons by a tree, though that's brilliant enough, but also because Baek has the one thing many Mentors don't: a sense of humour. He's willing to take the piss out of himself, have a little fun with Damien, rather than just being a po-faced wisdom-dispenser. Not only is Baek a refreshingly original creation, but he's also very cool in his own right. I mean, anyone who plays baseball (or gnome tossing: very class:D) with a psychotic demon as the ball has got to be worth getting to know.:D

Ah yes, the demons. Again, most fantasy/fantasy-esque stories like to fill their universe with weird and wondeful creatures, names and details that will be interesting, but usually 90-99% irrelevant. Sure, that kind of thing is fun, and helps create that sense of place, but it's again refreshing to see that you're just keeping things simple here. There's Angels, Demons, half-breeds, Celestials, the plants and animals Damien can talk to, but that seems to be about it: based on the odd reference here and there, there's clearly other stuff, but in terms of the school, that's about all we need to know. 'Course, this is only chapter two, and I could be reading this completely wrong, but I like the simplicity of what I'm seeing: Angels are the beautiful ones, Demons are the bullying ones, Arratun are the outcast ones, Celestials are the anonymous "other" ones. Iconic set-ups like this are always engaging, especally because any twists you provide are so much fun.;):D

So, that's my fairly lengthy ten pence. This is a story I'm already excited about, and I can't wait to see what else you can spring on us.:D

-Matt A-

PS: I have to agree with you on your Harry Potter comment. As you've just shown, and (at the risk of egotism) I've shown as well, there's still so much more you can do with fantasy-esque school settings...;)
 
Just in case you were worried, no, I haven't forgotten this story just yet! I have more written, but I want to write some more before I post it, to increase the 'buffer zone' so to speak between what I've written and what I've posted ;)

So I shall post more soon, hopefully by the end of this week!

Cheers, Dimster, Delta Member One
 
Here is more of the story to entertain and amaze! Please, enjoy yourselves, eh?



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Dragonblood.





Skidding to a halt in front of his locker, Damien quickly tore out the first text book he found and slammed it shut, the door banging loudly and swinging back open mockingly. He didn’t bother to close it properly, instead opting to take off towards his class on the other side of the central plaza. He was close now, only a corner and a few metres to go before…

WHAM!

He fell backwards, stars tap-dancing across his face for the second time today. He shook his head clear, only to find his vision focused upon none other than the vice-principal of the school, Ms. Hyrit, who stood still like a silently raging monolith. The collision didn’t seem to even faze her, nor even knock a single hair out of place. The only visible retribution she received for blocking Damien’ panicked path were the ripples that originated from the point of impact and traveled throughout her massive bulk.

“Damien Papridis, come with me please.”

Damien swallowed a large lump of pure, knotted fear before slowly tailing behind, head hanging low and looking no different than a condemned man heading to the hangman’s noose.

The two walked in silence towards the front offices and it was soon clear where the rhinoceros in the polka-dot dress was talking him; the principal’s lair. Whereas most of the staff were celestials as well, with a few centaurs scattered here and there for the ‘fringe’ classes that no other teachers would take, the principal was an actual, real-life dragon. Ok, maybe only quarter-blood dragon with the rest being a strange hodge-podge mixture of Celestial, Angelic and what was rumoured to be Satyric blood, the fact still remained that Talon Feasir, Havenfern High Principal, was an excellent pyrokinetic. In fact, he was one of very few fire conductors that could actually create fire from scratch, rather than having to manipulate an already-present flame. That, coupled with his legendary short temper, proved that he was one being you did not wish to ever encounter the bad side of, and it was obvious that Damien was going to do exactly that.

“Please Ms. Hyrit, I didn’t mean to run into you, please don’t take me to see the principal.”

No response from the stalwart behemoth.

Damien tried flattery. “Ms. Hyrit, did I ever tell you how er…” Damien drifted off, looking for something to compliment. “…how tall you look with your hair in that bun?”

“Mr. Papridis, the encounter earlier has nothing to do with why I am taking you to see Mr. Feasir. It has to do with that innocent demon you decided to assault during lunch.”

Damien attempted to ignore the fact that the words ‘innocent’ and ‘demon’ should never be used in the same sentence unless the word ‘not’ is included, but he couldn’t. His mind tried to contemplate what an innocent demon would be like, but even he, with his amazing imagination, simply could not conceive of such an absurd notion. He stared at the Hippo in high heels with a more than slight amount of pity and remorse, and lucky for him that stare only fell upon her back.



“Are we done?”

“Not yet. The next student in question is a Reaper by the name of Grimm.”

“A Reaper? Reapers can’t possibly be useful. They’re strictly honour-bound, he’d be more of a hindrance then a help.”

“Are you questioning me again?”

“…No…”

“Good. You are correct that Reapers are normally honour-bound creatures. However honour is outdated. I think we can persuade Grimm to see that our side is the more profitable one.”

“But how can a Reaper help? They’re fairly ordinary beings-.”

“With the ability to harvest a soul with a single touch. I think that’s quite useful, don’t you?”

“But why Grimm?”



Grimm fidgeted nervously as he cast a queasy look upon the diminutive beetle.

Its spotted outer shell cracked open and revealed a pair of gossamer wings that buzzed furiously, propelling it into the air before slamming headfirst into the glass cage it was in and tumbling unceremoniously down to the ground. Grimm could see the poor creature was dazed and confused, its wings still buzzing sporadically due to a reflex action rather than anything else.

“Grimm, is there a problem?”

Grimm glanced up, his train of thought crashing in a gigantic wave of new-founded anxiety. The class he was in turned and watched the commotion with eager eyes.

Grimm shook his head vigorously. “No Ma’am, no problem. None at all. Nope.”

“If that’s the case, could you please demonstrate to the rest of the class how a Reaper would go about claiming the life of that beetle in front of you?”

Grimm was suddenly finding it very hard to swallow, and drops of sweat snaked their way down his forehead.

“Um… I don’t… I…I can’t.”

The class sniggered, and Grimm’s characteristically pale skin gave way to a deep red plume.

“You can’t? Or you won’t?” His teacher pressured.

“I…I won’t.” He replied, hanging his head in shame.

“I see.” She began, her poison-laced voice quickly silencing any raucous students. “Let me get this straight, Grimm. You are born a Reaper, and yet you refuse to kill this one, insignificant beetle?”

That was exactly right, and it pained Grimm to have to admit it every time it was brought up. “Yes ma’am, that is correct.”

The class erupted into a cacophony of laughter, with more than one crumpled up piece of paper flung his way.

“Be quiet. Grimm, stay behind after class. I think you need a word with the principal.”

If Grimm was nervous before, he was positively terrified now. Even a few of the students began to regret throwing balls of paper at him.

Not many though.

Grimm sighed and resigned to his fate. “Yes ma’am.”

The class he had despised only moments ago was now very highly appreciated, and with growing fear Grimm witnessed the time slowly but surely slip away, until the loud scream of the school bell rang throughout the grounds of Havenfern High. All of the students bar Grimm filtered out through the doors on either side of the room, leaving Grimm alone on his chair in a sea of empty desks.

“Grimm, in the privacy of this room, tell me, why did you refuse to kill the beetle?”

Grimm sighed. His whole life had been like this. If they weren’t concerned, they were ashamed, like his parents, but always mocking the Reaper who was too polite to kill, who’d rather go out for a cup of tea with his subject rather than claim their life. It had always been like that, and he didn’t know why.

“We were too soft on you.” His father would say between the sobs of his grieving mother every time Grimm’s inherent kindness was brought up. His mother often behaved as if she had lost her first-born, and in a way, she was right, Grimm thought to himself. She wasn’t getting the son she wanted, she was getting a coward.

A coward. The word cut deep. Every time it was used to describe him a fresh wound opened up.

The truth was, he couldn’t bring himself to kill…anything. He wasn’t a killer, he wasn’t cut out for being a Reaper, Reapers aren’t supposed to have a conscience. So what was wrong with him?

“Well?” His teacher asked, suddenly losing patience.

Grimm lowered his head. “I’m sorry Ma’am, but I couldn’t kill it. I can’t kill… it’s like I’m doing a bad thing, it doesn’t feel right.”

His teacher sighed, her hair slithering above her head in annoyance. Ms. Rasha was a gorgon, much like the infamous Medusa, who turned would-be slayers into stone with a single glare. Thankfully, Ms. Rasha wasn’t as aggressive as that, and contrary to popular belief that ability is not permanent, but rather called upon at will. Disregarding her hair, Ms. Rasha could be considered an attractive woman, if you were of the species that were actually attracted to such humanoids. Her figure was shapely and filled out in all the right places, and her complexion delicately pale, complete with striking emerald eyes. She began to regret making a fool of Grimm during class, but she had never encountered someone such as him.

Talon would know what to do. The headmaster always did.

“We’ll talk to the principal about this, come on.”

With that Grimm lifted himself off his chair and began tailing his teacher.

It wasn’t that bad, Grimm thought. Ms. Rasha had a really nice a-



“That’s why.”

“…”

“What, don’t you get it?”

“He’s afraid to kill a bug.”

“Exactly, meaning his weak-willed. Convincing him will be like convincing a goblin to eat his own feces.”




The rest of the short walk was concluded in an awkward silence, with Damien fidgeting nervously in a vain attempt to appear as innocent as possible. Before long, the towering wooden doors of the principal’s office came into view, resplendent in flowing red silk and the finest Hembra, a very rare material that is said to be made from the mane of a black unicorn, a creature so elusive that men have spent their entire lives tracking it, only to die before their task is done.

How Talon managed to acquire such a material was the least of Damien’ concerns, and with a growing fear never before felt coursing through his veins, his rotund escort rapped briskly on the polished wood, and within moments a booming voice echoed through the hallway.

“Enter!”

Ms. Hyrit opened the door and shoved Damien in, giving him one final look of what seemed to be remorse before vanishing out of sight behind the creaking timber. Damien turned to face the principal, who was shrouded in a cloud of thick, metallic gray smoke, his yellow eyes being the only part of his body that gave away his position. They glowed eerily in the dark room, and it was easy to recognize that there truly was dragon blood fuelling his heart.

His entire office was lovingly furnished, adorned with very expensive artifacts and items, much like a spoilt child’s retreat. A fish tank that stretched from one side of the room to the other was filled with many exotic aquatic creatures, from the relatively tame Riza which paraded around the tank in large schools to the carnivorous Jawfish, whose appetite came around only once every three years. When it did though, it was known to consume well over seven times its own body weight, a very, very large amount for an already large fish.

On the other side of the wall stained glass windows allowed colourful rays of sunlight to filter in, bathing the room in a very dim purple glow.

“Damien, is it?” A gravelly, baritone voice echoed out from the cloud of smoke.

“Y-yes, sir.”

A plume of smoke billowed out forcefully and stung Damien’ eyes.

“It has come to my attention that you have been causing a disturbance in the yard. Is this true?”

“Yes, but-.”

“Is this true, Mr. Papridis?”

Damien bowed his head. “Yes, sir.”

“I am aware that Demons are less-than-trustworthy creatures, fuelled by instinct rather than logic, but Celestials are well-known for their reserved and calm stature. Tell me, what happened that was so earth-shattering that you simply had to smash this now-misconception?”

“The kid, the Demon kid-.”

“Azazael.” Talon instructed.

“-Azazael. He was picking on someone, a girl.”

There was another plume of smoke as Talon exhaled heavily.

I see.

An awkward silence befell upon the two, and after a few moments Damien decided to press on.

“They were teasing her and stealing her books, so I decided to try and stop them.”

“How much do you weigh, Damien?”

“Pardon me, sir?”

“How much do you weigh?”

“Er… about a hundred and thirty-five pounds, sir.”

“A hundred and thirty five pounds.” Talon repeated, as if making a point. “You mean to tell me that a one hundred thirty-five pound Celestial knocked out a three hundred pound fully transformed demon in only one blow?”

“I…uh…-.” Damien faltered, looking for words.

“It is obvious that you had the aid of a magical device, and you must be aware that any magical devices excluding ones used for educational purposes are strictly forbidden from the school grounds, yes?”

On the inside, Damien breathed a sigh of relief. If that was the reason he was here then he would simply explain his ability and all would be good. On the outside Damien kept up the cowering and frightened façade.

“But sir, I didn’t use any magical devices.”

Another puff of smoke.

Really. Then how exactly did you manage to incapacitate Azazael?”

Damien took a deep breath. “Baek helped me.”

“Baek? I don’t recall any students enrolled named Baek.”

“He’s not a student…exactly. He’s a tree.”

A long, fat silence.

“A tree?

Damien shuffled slightly.

“Yes, sir. I can kinda talk to plants and animals…”

“I see. You can talk to trees.” Talon replied, clearly not believing a single word.

“Yes, sir. I can speak with trees, or at least, a tree. I spoke with Baek, he’s the one who told me to stick up for the girl, he should-.”

Enough.

Damien gulped. He had crossed the line.

“You really expect me to believe this? Do you take me for a fool? Are you even listening to what you are saying?”

Damien took a step back in fear as Talon rose out of his chair, yellow eyes squinting menacingly through the haze.

“I…I… it’s all true! I swear, I would never-.”

ENOUGH! Get out of my office right this instant you disrespectful fool! I will be contacting your parents about your behaviour, make no mistake. And if you ever, ever cause a disturbance in my school again I will personally make sure you will regret it. Now leave.”

“But sir, I…”

“Did you not just hear me?”

“I did, but there’s something you should know-.”

“I’ve heard enough.”

“No sir, really, your jawfish, his feeding cycle will be coming very soon.”

Talon turned his head and peered into the fish tank. It was true that his jawfish hadn’t eaten in a while, but it was certainly no more then a year since his last feed.

“Is this some kind of joke?”

“No sir.”

“Get out.”

“Yes sir.”

With that, Damien scuttled out, proverbial tail between his legs as he scrambled for the doorknob and sped through the oak doors, mind reeling.

He had done it again, spoken before thinking and gotten himself into even more trouble. First with the demon kid, now with Talon, the school principal.

“Damn damn damn damn damn.”

So caught up was he in his thoughts that he completely failed to notice the short, pale fellow with a billowing grey robe following Ms. Rasha towards Talon’s office. This was no small thing, because given optimal conditions, Damien would be the first to jump at an opportunity to stare at Ms. Rasha.



“Talon is going to be a problem.”

“I’m perfectly aware of that. I’ll figure something out.”


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Also, be aware that I have edited/changed my previous two chapters, so it would help to quickly go over them again so this chapter can fully make sense!
 
It must be said, it's good to see some more from this story.:D

And now, with chapter three, we get two more characters added to our main cast. Firstly, there's Grimm, the pacifist Reaper. Whilst the "born killer who won't kill" set-up is as old as the hills, something so utterly contrary never fails to be funny, and the twist you've provided here is an interesting one: Grimm isn't a predator with morals, but an anthropomorphic personification who can't do his one and only job. Twists on the character of Death are also nothing new, but I think this might just have some mileage.:D

Oh yes, and the name is absolute genius.;)

Then there's the other new character: Talon, the quarter-dragon, borderline-psychotic principal. This guy really is something special: more like Al Capone than a headteacher, the very representation of all those times when you were dragged to the principal's office, certain of a slow, messy and painful death. Even more so than Grimm, there's something just so...iconic about him. I can readily imagine the huge and ludicrously expensive office, the Blofeld-like collection of exotic and dangerous fish, the evil yellow eyes shining from behind a wall of smoke...it's all rather class stuff.:D

And let's not forget about the new interlude pieces. What was originally a plot so murky as to be non-existent is now, whilst not really any clearer, still in enough shape to give us something to follow. In particular, it makes us pay much closer attention to all these new characters, as we know that they're going to be sticking around for quite some time. More to the point, you've raised the interesting question of exactly what kind of insane scheme could link Damien, Anzu, Azazael and Grimm, and how someone like Talon would be an obstacle to it. Also, who are these two speakers, and on whose side are they playing?:confused:

The cool thing is, as well as giving us interesting stuff to ponder, the bickering between these Speakers is also rather funny. It isn't often that "..." alone can make me laugh.;):D

That, I think, is about all I have to say. It's only chapter three, and you're already onto an original, funny and fascinating story. Great work.:D

-Matt A-
 
Newcomers and troublemakers.

“Enter!”

Grimm froze momentarily, before silently coasting his way inside the intimidating office.

There was a long pause as Talon examined this new figure in front of him. Whatever Damien was, Talon thought, Grimm wasn’t, and vice versa.

“Grimm, is it?”

“Y-y-yes, sir.”

Another pregnant pause.

“Care to explain as to why you refused to do your school work?”

Grimm shuffled.

“W-well, I…I don’t, I mean, I didn’t do it because I er…I…”

“Out with it, young man.”

“I…I don’t like killing.”

Sheer and absolute silence shrouded them like the smoke that constantly wafted around the room. It was thick, uncomfortable and sickening, to Grimm at least.

“Let me see if I’m on the right deck of playing cards, Grimm. You are a Reaper, yes?”

“Yes, sir.”

“Are both your parents Reapers?”

“Yes, sir.”

“And you refuse to kill a…” Talon scanned a report paper that lay in front of him. “a beetle?”

Grimm lowered his head further.

“Yes, sir.”

“Very well. You may leave.”

Grimm glanced up at Talon.

“Excuse me, sir?”

“Leave, Grimm. I will talk further with your parents. I know everything I need to know. You may go.”

Grimm gulped. “Yes, sir.”

And before the word ‘sir’ reached Talon’s ears, Grimm was gone, vanished behind his towering wooden doors.



Damien slowly marched towards his next class, Mathematics. He sighed heavily and hung his head low, dreading the thought of his parents receiving word that their son had misbehaved and lied to the school principal, even though it wasn’t true.

It was at that moment he realized he had forgotten something, something very, very important.

His school books.

He had placed them on a nearby chair in the principal’s office whilst he talked with Talon, and had forgotten to pick them up when he left.

He considered simply going to class regardless, but he had gotten himself in more trouble than he could bear, so with a heavy heart he turned and headed back towards Talon’s lair.

Before long he was standing beneath the doors yet again, and, fearing a repeat of the events only ten minutes ago, he knocked lightly.

There was no reply. After a generous amount of time, Damien knocked again. Still no answer.

Holding his breath, Damien slowly pushed the door open and it swung silently on its giant hinges. “Hello?”

No answer.

Damien crept in and snatched his books quickly. As he made to leave however, Damien heard a very peculiar sound. It reminded him of someone burping underwater…



Azazael whimpered. His face, already tomato-shaped, now sported a delightful throbbing apple on his cheek. It pulsated painfully and sent daggers through his head while the school nurse gently swabbed and treated it.

He was fuming. Pure rage coursed through his veins and boiled his blood before ventilating in puffs of smoke from his nostrils in typical Demonic fashion.

“You poor thing, you must’ve suffered so much.” The nurse cooed melodically, her voice soothing the infuriated demon slightly. “Don’t worry; you’ll be fine in no time.”

Azazael didn’t reply. He was far too busy conjuring up different ways of torture for his new friend Damien. Impaling? No, too quick. Decapitation? Nah, too lethal. He had heard a rumour that all Celestials have the ability to regenerate their limbs. Maybe he should test that theory.

“Now just lie down and I’ll go get some Gergeg paste.” There was that voice again. How could he refuse such a beautiful, silky voice?



“Any more outstanding students?”

“Just one more. A Chronis by the name of Rafele.”

“Rafele…That name sounds familiar…”

“It should, he’s Aramon’s son.”

“Aramon? I see… So we already had an agent infiltrate the school.”

“Well… not exactly. He and his father are not on the best of terms.”

“But blood is thicker than water… surely he’d want to continue his family’s impressive legacy?”

“You’d think that, and with his talent he certainly is more than capable, but kids are strange creatures. I’m sure he’ll mature soon enough though.”



Rafele smiled. The stupid demon got what was coming to him, and the only regret he had was that he didn’t do it himself; instead some Celest managed to “lay the beat-down” on Azazael.

Rumours spread quickly in this school. Anyone who had something to hide (And everyone did) soon found that secrets simply did not exist at Havenfern High. From Celestials with Shape-shifting abilities, Psions with mind-reading psychic powers, to plain old invisibility; privacy was truly a privilege, not a right as many assumed.

Hence, as soon as Baek slapped the fat demon to Oblivion, the story spread quicker than the ripples on Azazael’s cheek.

Rafele looked at his pocket watch. It was 3.16 in the afternoon. Just ten more minutes of history class and he’d be a free man.

Until tomorrow, anyway.

Rafele continued to gaze at his watch. He decided that ten minutes was too long to wait and decided to rectify the situation. Eyebrows furrowed, he began to concentrate intently on the hands of the watch as they signaled the passing of every second with an indiscriminate tick.

Tick…Tick…Tick… Tick… Tick…Tick… Every pause another second passed, until…

Tick…Tick……Tiiick……Tiiiick……

The ticks seemed to grow longer and rarer, before stopping completely.

Rafele’s power had just been awakened.

Rafele was a chronis, and he had just turned back time by two seconds.

“Damn it!” He swore, a little too loudly. The class turned to look at him with questioning eyes.

“Well, if Rafele doesn’t want to leave early, we can wait until the school bell.”

Angry eyes replaced questioning ones as his peers cast him venomous glares. “Huh? No no, I was talking about my er… my watch! I dropped it, but now I found it so it’s ok. We can leave early, I don’t mind. Really.”

“Well that’s good to know. And remember, tomorrow we start work on your first History assignment. The rise and fall of the Minoi. So make sure you do at least some study on the topic, okay?” The class murmured their affirmatives and filed out of the room, grateful for the small reprieve.

Rafele could not understand why he had turned back time when he specifically wanted it to go forward. It had happened in the morning as well, during Philosophy with Giggles. He had managed to wind back the second hand twice momentarily, but never forward. That trick always eluded him.

Picking up his books and stationery, Rafele lagged behind the rest of the students, eager to draw as little attention as possible his way and get home so he could continue to practice without the fear of getting caught and expelled.

Speeding up or slowing down time is a serious offence at Havernfern High, mainly because it’s extremely difficult to prove. The harsh penalty is there to act as a deterrent, but out of its entire, extremely long history, only three people have ever suffered consequences.

One of them was his father.

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Bum-bum-BUUUUM! *cheesy plot-twist-revealing music* Nothing much to say here, except I hope you enjoyed! So... enjoy!
 
And enjoy it I very much did.:D

Most notably, we now have the final member of our main cast, or at least seemingly so: Rafele, the Celestial with the world's most annoying powers. Whenever any school student has wanted the ability to control time, it's so they can get a really tedious lesson ended a little quicker: Rafele has the same desire, and the ability to see it done, but can only ever achieve the opposite. This story already contains many ironies, but this is one of the best.:D

On a related note, we also have another plot point: Rafele's ancestry, and how the Speakers might turn this against him. "Children struggling under parents' legacy" isn't a particularly new theme, I admit, but just like everything else in this story, I'm confident that you can bring something fresh and exciting here. I just need to see what kind of Legacy we're talking about before I come up with my theories.;)

But this chapter wasn't just about Rafele. Firstly, there was the conversation between Grimm and Talon, which didn't tell us anything new, but was still a delight to read: very funny, and a perfect encapsulation of a student's bowel-shredding terror.:D

Secondly, we have a return to Azazael, mid-way through a fairly epic sulk. His musing on how to torture Damien was class ("Decapitation? Nah, too lethal.":D), and it looks like he'll be holding that grudge until the end of time. The war between these two is going to be A-grade reading.:evil:

Thirdly and finally, we have Damien having to re-enter Talon's office (always a nightmare situation), resulting in this line:

chapter four said:
Damien heard a very peculiar sound. It reminded him of someone burping underwater…

Am I right in thinking this belcher is the Jawfish? If I am, then I have a feeling this might just be important...;)

There's probably one or two more things I can say here, but I think that's all the important stuff. Besides, I need to get some sleep. Either way, that was a wicked chapter, and as usual, I can't wait to see some more.:D

-Matt A-
 

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