Whether he's "connected" to Raven or not, Blue's still quite a character. I get the sense that, when answers start clicking into place, we'll be knowing some pretty horrible stuff...which is promising.
Why are you worried? Your writing is amazing! I agree with Crowgirl i think Raven and Blue are connected. They have the teleporting thing in common. This story has potential!
Now im waiting for another chapter to get more info!
Okay, before you send me another PM, I'm letting you know that I will read this when I have time. Right now, I'm loaded with a bunch of stuff from college and high school and WFWC and girls and other things. Since there's only five chapters (so far), I think I can get through this fairly quickly...
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