Teen Titans Fan Fiction Fragments (C)

[Crowgirl]

[Jumps in with hands on hips] I... Have ARRIVED!!! 'Cha!

So...

This is not a dud at all. 'Tis very interesting. The first chapter had great detail, but told us absolutely nothing about the character. However, it seems as if that's what you were striving to reach, so I must congradulate you on a job well done.

The second chapter was much more entertaining than the first. We see the Titans arguing over pizza, then Blue comes in and bada-bing-bada-boom. Etcetera.

Now, I have to disagree with Alpha Man on the pizza thing, because sure, it's used a lot, but every person who uses it approaches it with a different manner and incorperates their own style into it. I quite liked the opening, it was very well done.

And then Blue comes in, suggesting two pies. Blue is an original name, me thinks. From his smoke and eyes, I can see why they'd call him Blue, but I have to wonder if his real name (which he wasn't kind enough to give us) has anything to do with the story. AH well, there's me, pointing out little things that seem not to matter too much.

So... this seems extremely promising (And I am dreadfully sorry for not replying last night, for something came up. ), and if you drop this I will have to kill you, cut you up into little cubes, then serve you on a platter like cheese cubes.

Ciao,
CG

 

[rrarbecy]

You've made things all better. Thank you.

 

[Alpha Man]

How about a new chapter now?

 

[rrarbecy]

Halfway done.

 

[ShadowOfAGhost]

THE VOICES! THE VOICES ARE IN MY HEAD!!!!!!


Hello. good storyyou have going here and it defin9itly has potential. Keep in mind what you reveal and what you keep hidden, worst case scenario is that if the story is going nowhere, you can blow it all away and start anew with the plot, building off what little info you have given us. The Titans decision seemed a littl,e quick, and kinda rushed, butbut then again, this was a sudden thing.

Your writing is better than ever, and you are doing really well, I look forward to reading upcoming chapters!

P.S. "Winston Churchill, amoung other things is famous for his quick wit, in fact it is said that he was at a party one time whena woman came up to him. 'My good man, I do believe that you are drunk' she said, to which he replied 'And you are ugly, but when i wake up in the morning, I will be sober.'" -Sergent Breen, Religion Teacher

 

[Starfire5]

AHAHAHAHAH! Blue hair! I've been waiting for quite some time now. And its come true!

YAY! lol

*calms down*

Cheese cubes EH? lol Nice Crowgirl nice.

We still need more info.

 

[Pookey]

this is...intresting...like the others said info, but i see where ur going with the mysterious thing hehe has much potentail dude i wish ya luck on ur new fic -thumbs up-

 

[rrarbecy]

Cause' I'm a picker​

I'm a grinner​

I'm a lover​

and I'm a sinner​

playin' my music in the sun​

I'm a joker​

I'm a smoker​

I'm a mid-night toker​

I sure don’t want to hurt no one​

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"Joker", by Steve Miller​

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Chapter 3: Impose ​

“Whoa, I didn’t think the place would be this enormous,” said Blue excitedly, taking in the mammoth entrance hall of Titan Tower. “It’s amazing! How the heck did you get it!?”

“I built it,” said Cyborg proudly, his chest puffing out a bit.

“You built this place?” asked Blue in amazement. “That’s…wow.” Blue continued to survey the room. Standing, he was a bit taller than Starfire, but his hair reached up to Cyborg's eye level. He wore a pair of army-like pants, blue and not green with several deep pockets, and a pale blue tank top. He placed his hands on his hips and nodded approvingly.

“So, Blue,” said Robin, “Blue can’t be your real name. What is it?”

“Well Robin can’t be your real name, can it!?” Blue shot back with surprising bite. Robin seemed much taken aback. Blue blushed bright red. “I’m sorry,” he said with a nervous laugh, “I didn’t mean to snap.”

Robin continued to stare at him. Blue scratched his head and looked down at his feet. I am Blue! Master of the first impression!, he thought angrily to himself.

“So,” said Cyborg to break the silence, “What do we have to eat here since we never had pizza.”

“Yeah, sorry about that,” said Blue, “I didn’t mean to interrupt your meal back there. I know how it feels to be starving.” He laughed slightly, “I could actually go for something to eat right now. I’ll go out and get something for myself.”

“You may eat here if you wish,” said Starfire invitingly.

“I really couldn’t impose,” said Blue. He paused for a moment, and then smiled. “But I already am, so I guess my conscience is clear.”

“I could also show you around the tower. The main areas,” offered Starfire.

“Well, I’d like that, but I wouldn’t want to be given the grand tour without the permission of the skipper,” he said smiling, with a look at Robin.

Robin contemplated for a minute. “I…I guess it’s all right. But I think Raven should take him around.”

“Why her?” asked Blue curiously.

“Because I have something for Starfire to do,” replied Robin.

“You do?” asked Starfire confusedly. Robin gave her a very obvious wink, but Blue pretended not to notice.

“It’s okay, I have no problem,” said Raven quickly, before Starfire could voice her noticeable confusion. She grabbed Blue’s arm and swept him quickly out of the room.
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Raven’s and Blue’s footsteps echoed down a broad hallway on the third floor as they made their way down it. Raven walked deliberately forward and Blue had his hands stuffed in his oversized pockets, his head toward the floor. “You don’t talk very much, do you?” he asked the stoic girl. Raven just gave him a reproachful glance.

“Yeah…” said Blue through the awkward silence, “this hasn’t been much of a tour.” He looked over at her expectantly. She still said nothing. “You know, if you’re not going to say anything, what was the point of accepting this job?” he asked impatiently. This solicited an answer.

“Because I don’t want you out of my sight,” she said crossly.

“Wow, I knew I was sexy, but this is ridiculous.” He cracked a smile. Raven gave him a murderous glance. “Hehehe…oops.” Kicking himself, he continued down the hall with the obviously belligerent girl.

After a while more of walking, they passed a room that made Blue’s eyes light up. “Cool, a gym.” He turned to Raven and said, “Mind if I go in for a second.” She said nothing, but Blue took it as a “yes.”

He stepped inside and was overcome by an uncontrollable urge to bounce around. Before he even realized what he was doing, he had cartwheeled clear across the room. Whoa, he thought, didn’t know I could do that. He came out of his cartwheel and flipped backward, bouncing off the wall and onto his hands. He flipped out of the handstand and landed perfectly on his feet. Didn’t know I could do that either.

Blue strolled back to the door and reemerged in the hallway. “Well, that was fun,” he laughed.

“You dropped something,” said Raven, pointing back inside the room. Something silver glinted on the floor. Blue rushed into the room and picked up the object, handling it as though it were glass.

“What is it?” asked Raven when he had come back out.

“Ah, so now you start civilized conversation,” said Blue with a smile.

“You didn’t answer my question.”

“Truth be told,” said Blue, playing with the item in his pocket, “I really don’t know what it is. It’s a ring, I know that. But I don’t know where it came from.” He pulled the ring out of his pocket. It was shaped like a rose with tiny crystals implanted in it. “I guess that’s why it glints in the sun and moonlight.” He looked at the ring as though it were made of diamond.

He smiled down at Raven. “Well, I think I’ve seen all I needed to see. It’s been-.” Blue was interrupted by a blaring siren filling the entire tower. “What the heck is that?” asked Blue, clapping his hands over his ears.

“That’s a siren,” replied Raven absentmindedly.

“Obviously,” shouted Blue, “but what does it mean!?”

“It means trouble.”

“Mind if I tag along?”

Without a word, Raven enveloped herself in dark light and disappeared. “I’ll take that as a ‘yes’,” said Blue before teleporting through the floor.

 

[Matt A]

Blue has some wit, it seems. I think I could come to like him...

Oh, and I wonder if he'll get to kick arse?

-Matt A-

 

[rrarbecy]

One of my goals is to make you guys like him. Thanks Matt. By the way, does anybody recognize my musical selection at the top?

 

[rrarbecy]

You know, reviews make me feel good. Let's just say I feel pretty down in the dumps at the moment. SO PLEASE HELP ME GET BETTER!

 

[Starfire5]

"Wow, I knew I was sexy, but this is ridiculous."

That made me laugh! You want us to like Blue? Does that mean disappointment is in our future?

 

[Rae]

Blue seems cool, and witty, which is a nice combo

You also pointed out the ring, which adds a nice level of mystery which i hope you'll explore

Can't wait for more, this looks good

Rae

 

[rrarbecy]

"Wow, I knew I was sexy, but this is ridiculous."

That made me laugh! You want us to like Blue? Does that mean disappointment is in our future?

Maybe... Maybe not... But I won't tell you yet. I'm annoying in that way.

 

[JAG]

What they said.

 

[Crowgirl]

Dude, Blue is hilarious!!!

That was a great chapter, Blue is definitely on the top of my favs list. Keep up the good work!!!

 

[Fuz]

I'm really liking this story. It is rare that you come across an OC that is cool! You've done a great job on this story. Keep up the awesome work!

 

[rrarbecy]

Dude, Blue is hilarious!!!

That was a great chapter, Blue is definitely on the top of my favs list. Keep up the good work!!!

I'm flattered. I hoped he would be well-liked, but I didn't think he'd become anyone's favorite so fast. And I didn't realize how comically inclined I am.

 

[Anime]

Spiked hair must be really popular, huh? I'm Robin's got it, Blue's got it, Michael Spicer's got it... lol. Notice the period after "lol" and not an exclamation point. Why? Because it was lol. lol!

Geez, that chapter was weird. Hence the weirdness in the world today.

 

[Matt A]

By the way, does anybody recognize my musical selection at the top?

I do. It's quite a famous song, and I believe Fatboy Slim did a cover of it about a year ago. Both versions are pretty cool.

-Matt A-