Recent content by ShadowOfAGhost

-takes a bow- thank you! thank you! but seriously, thank you. you gave me a lot of ideas to improve my writing.;) -Shadow :cool:

you bring up a lot of good points, but there is one thing that I will mention...Robin brushed it off for a reason, which may not make sense now, but later on it will. good sugestions otherwise, thank you!

So simply put, porn, or other things as mentioned here are just like a beginers method of drawing readers until you learn how to do that on your own, with your own abilities and talents as a writer. -Shadow :cool:

Okay, well that seems like all I'm going to get in the way of reviews for the time being. I'll work on the outline and the chapter as often as I can, But I'm going to be away each weekend in november, camping. (you heard me right, camping three times in one month) I -heart- Camping...

yeah, that and it's unusual for the author o ask questions back. commenting is n't that uncommon, but doing what he/she/it does, is. -Shadow :cool:

and that's what makes it fun! :D as far as the end of the story... -Shadow :cool:

I definitly see your point about hardwork deserving more than simplicity, and agree with it. as for that whole prattling schpeel, (or however the hell you spell it)I think everyone else is just in shock from seeing long responses. That or their brains exploded outright from actually thinking...

Okay a few things. First, true, this may not have been your best chapter so far, but it was pretty good. One of my problems with it was that it was far too predictable what would happen now, I'm probably no the only one that predicted that raven would be making use of the time portal in the...

Okay, just in response to what you wree saying, here's alittle insight into what the members here tend to feel (or at least, from my oppinion) While structured and carefully thought out comments are beyond valuble, even the basic "kewl, write more" comments do good in their own way...

very nice work. I reiterate here about what I said in YIM, FANTASTIC opening. Glad to see you finally found the will to write another chapter, it did a really good job, and provided a great amount of detail on the character's background, however gory it may be. but gore isgood and blood is...

Hell, I think it's the most thought provoking conversation I've had in my life! (outside of school, that is) and hopefully it should help all three of us with our writing. By the way, nice to make your aquaintence.

Good God, Dude, you have been replying for the past half hour! :eek: :p

Oh gee, you is sooooooo, funny. :p -Shadow :cool:

Primarily I mean in terms of dialogue. his word choice there seemed kind of limited, though there was still a bit of variety. for example: etc... Notice Rrarbecy does good in tacking in a bit after said or replied to keep it somewhat different, but here's a suggestion for you Rrarbecy, try...

Welcome to all new members -Shadow :cool: